It’s no secret that the growth of digital publishing has required communications departments in all industries to rethink content delivery. And it’s not just for external audiences. Internal communications are also changing. Many companies are shifting from publishing a monthly magazine for employees to posting short blogs on an intranet. When channels change, your approach to the content itself must also adjust. Traditional print stories call for formal, fact-heavy text, while web writing should take a conversational tone.
Regardless of format, sources are what make a news story credible, and for most companies, valuable quotes from employees are essential for internal stories. But, transitioning print news to internal blog posts affects attribution—so, how do other companies incorporate employee voice without sounding too “newsy”? An executive in our Employee Communications Forum recently asked a similar question. Here are a few takeaways from that discussion:
- Avoid ghostwriting. CEC members who contributed to the discussion agree that attributing a blog post to an employee who didn’t write it will raise credibility issues. Ghostwriting also engenders homogeneity, as blogs lack the individual writing styles of each employee.
- Use a conversational tone. Blog posts are less formal and should have a free-flowing, personal voice. Try cutting back on jargon and corporate-speak. One member recommends removing quotation marks to make employee attribution more casual.
- Add videos. Putting employees on camera can be a great way to supplement posts or cover full stories. Short videos enable employees to add their own voice, and also make it clear who’s providing the information. Using a simple Flip camera works well here.
- Use quotes to tell the story. Instead of quoting an employee once, one member suggests using their quotes to write the post. Other members suggest using a simple Q & A structure.
How do you keep blog posts from sounding too “newsy”?
Related CEC Resources:
- Create content that will be easily shared. See how Intuit crafts “Tweetable” speeches.
- See how Aviva, Sprint, TD Bank, and Sabre source stories from employees and allow them to share their own with one another.
- Help executives tailor their voice for the web:Westpac’s Internal Discussion Forum





Once upon a time, the intranet’s purpose was to store information for a small set of users, usually just IT geeks. Back in those days, decentralized intranet governance was fine, given the simplicity of the systems.